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Monday, 17 May 2021

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 I have not done too much but I have done a bit of work today it is a Monday and it is the 17 of may 8 days till my birthday which is so exciting, I cant wait till my Birthday ''Yay''. This term we are doing loads of research of little blue penguins and their predators, food and life span. I love blue penguins and have seen pictures but never in person in fact I love any animal except spiders and snakes, anyway back to the topic so a few weeks ago the whole of moana learning hub went to douglas street, I think and then we gave loads of flyers about the blue penguins with questions and the questions where have you seen a blue penguin? Where did you see it? When did you see it? My favorite part was the flyers.

3 comments:

  1. Hi keylaine I like how you got straight into the topic and explained what we did by handing out those flyers. Also you gave me some great ideas.😁

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  2. Hi Keylaine! My star was the whole text because it tells the reader a ton about what you have been learning Which is good, but it was kind of all over the show because sometimes you would be talking about one subject and in that conversation you would start talking about another thing I got a bit confused. So my wish is for you to make sure that your talking about one subject and instead of interrupting yourself just finish what your saying first, and then say your other subject.

    From Dune

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  3. Good job Keylaine! You can really see the improvement from last year. The survey sounds cool, but I wish I was there because I was at aurora.

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