Once upon a time there was boy named Jack everyone is nice to Jack, even his Great Grandmother who is probably 1000000 years old. Jack was trying to skip stones in a pond near his house he was mostly bullied and disliked at school by the King's son and his mates.In the background you could hear '' Ahh! screamed a lady.''
Here comes the flesh gobbler '' said a scottish man. ''Go away troll'' screamed a English man''. Jack saw Leo the king's son and ran as fast as he could. ''Get him'' said leo.'' Come here jack we won't hurt you'' he screamed.Jack ran into a wall at the corner Leo and his friends suddenly ran. ''Their probably scared of me'' Jack said.
''No they are not'' his Great Grandmother said, it's the troll behind you. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Jack screamed. ''It won't eat you Jack, trolls eating people is just silly old myths'' said his Great Grandmother. Well gran your probably 1000000 years old you don't know what your talking about. Don't boy, I will hit you with my broom. Ok sorry. Jack slowly touched the troll. Hi buddie. ''FI FY FO FUM'' said the troll and laughed at the people.
Ahhhhh! screamed Jack. ''IM KIDDING'' said the troll. I DON'T EAT HUMANS I EAT TREES. Um less creepy Jack replied. ''You need to stop judging a book by it's cover ''said his Great Grandmother. ''I know, I know ''Jack replied.
Part one maybe
Hi keylaine you did a great job on your blog I like have you have a moral to your story and I really like your creativity on trolls and many other things, ka pai.
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Keylaine I loved your story it was really funny and it had a nice message at the end. Next time It would be good if you did a title for the story not just saying "what my quickwrite was." Other from that it was really good and like I said it was so funny
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Hello Keylaine. I like how you put in speech marks, commas and good apostrophe's. I think you should add a better title, but I love the sentence of the troll saying he eats trees. What is Jack's great grandmother's name? From Prince.
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